Honestly, this is pretty good, and I think it has a solid start, but some of the layering and note choices feel a little off. I'm sorry, I'm not a musician, so it's hard for me to describe, but there's a couple sections that are just don't fit in with the underlying orchestral elements. That was what you did the best on. For example, that final drum beat at the end of the song. It's mildly off-putting. I feel like the trailing off piano would have been a better choice. All in all, good song, but a few bad elements tarnish the experience.
I hope you keep making music, because you definitely have potential (this is still far better than anything I could ever imagine making). It's also good to see some real creators here with the sea of AI songs that is forming around everything.